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652 lines
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<div class="hd-meta">
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<span>五维评审</span>
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<span>·</span>
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<span>2026.04.27</span>
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<span>·</span>
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<span>OD · Critique 技能</span>
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</div>
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<h1 class="hd-title">magazine-web-ppt<br>示例演示</h1>
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</div>
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<p class="hd-verdict">
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<strong>总体 7.4 / 10。</strong>哲学内核扎实、细节到位——每张幻灯片看起来都出自同一位设计师之手。创新方面有意保守；功能性扣分的原因仅在于示例未附带真实图片。
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</p>
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</header>
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<!-- ============ Radar + Score table ============ -->
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<section class="top">
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<div class="radar-card">
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<div class="lbl">得分雷达图</div>
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<!-- Pentagon radar, 5 axes; score grid at 0/2.5/5/7.5/10 -->
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<!-- Center 150,150. Radius 110 = 10/10. -->
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<!-- Grid rings 25/50/75/100% of 110 = 27.5 / 55 / 82.5 / 110 -->
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<!-- Pentagon angles: -90, -18, 54, 126, 198 (deg) measured from center.
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Order: top=Philosophy, top-right=Hierarchy, bottom-right=Detail,
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bottom-left=Function, top-left=Innovation -->
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<!-- Score area · Phil 8 / Hier 7 / Det 8 / Func 6 / Innov 5
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Distances from center (radius 110):
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Phil 8 → 88 : 150, 150 - 88 = 150, 62
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Hier 7 → 77 : 150 + 77*sin(72°), 150 - 77*cos(72°)
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≈ 150 + 73.24, 150 - 23.79
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= 223.24, 126.21
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Det 8 → 88 : 150 + 88*sin(144°), 150 - 88*cos(144°)
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≈ 150 + 51.72, 150 + 71.20
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= 201.72, 221.20
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Func 6 → 66 : 150 - 66*sin(36°), 150 + 66*cos(36°)
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≈ 150 - 38.79, 150 + 53.40
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= 111.21, 203.40
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Innov 5 → 55 : 150 - 55*sin(108°),150 - 55*cos(108°)
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≈ 150 - 52.32, 150 + 17.00
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= 97.68, 167.00
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Wait - cos(108°) is negative, so 150 - 55*(-0.309) = 150 + 17, that's bottom of axis. But Innov axis is top-left. Let me redo.
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Innov axis end point: 45.34, 116.05. Vector from center (150,150): (-104.66, -33.95), magnitude 110.
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At score 5, scale = 5/10 = 0.5: center + 0.5 * (-104.66, -33.95) = 150 - 52.33, 150 - 16.97 = 97.67, 133.03 -->
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<text class="lbl" x="150" y="28" text-anchor="middle">PHILOSOPHY</text>
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<text class="lbl" x="270" y="116" text-anchor="middle">HIERARCHY</text>
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<text class="lbl" x="220" y="259" text-anchor="middle">DETAIL</text>
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<text class="lbl-n" x="220" y="275" text-anchor="middle">8</text>
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<text class="lbl" x="80" y="259" text-anchor="middle">FUNCTION</text>
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<text class="lbl-n" x="80" y="275" text-anchor="middle">6</text>
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<text class="lbl" x="30" y="116" text-anchor="middle">INNOVATION</text>
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<text class="lbl-n" x="22" y="100" text-anchor="middle">5</text>
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<div class="overall">综合 · <span class="n">7.4</span> / 10 · 等级 <em>Strong</em></div>
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<div class="scores" aria-label="得分明细">
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<div class="score-row">
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<div class="score-name">哲学一致性<span class="en">Phil. cons.</span></div>
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<div class="score-bar"><span class="score-bar-fill" style="width:80%"></span></div>
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<div class="score-num">8<span class="denom">/10</span></div>
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<div class="score-band band-strong">Strong</div>
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<div class="score-row">
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<div class="score-name">视觉层级<span class="en">Hier.</span></div>
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<div class="score-bar"><span class="score-bar-fill" style="width:70%"></span></div>
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<div class="score-num">7<span class="denom">/10</span></div>
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<div class="score-band band-strong">Strong</div>
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</div>
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<div class="score-row">
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<div class="score-name">细节执行<span class="en">Detail</span></div>
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<div class="score-bar"><span class="score-bar-fill" style="width:80%"></span></div>
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<div class="score-num">8<span class="denom">/10</span></div>
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<div class="score-band band-strong">Strong</div>
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</div>
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<div class="score-row">
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<div class="score-name">功能性<span class="en">Func.</span></div>
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<div class="score-bar"><span class="score-bar-fill" style="width:60%"></span></div>
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<div class="score-num">6<span class="denom">/10</span></div>
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<div class="score-band band-functional">Functional</div>
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<div class="score-row">
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<div class="score-name">创新性<span class="en">Innov.</span></div>
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<div class="score-bar"><span class="score-bar-fill" style="width:50%"></span></div>
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<div class="score-num">5<span class="denom">/10</span></div>
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<div class="score-band band-functional">Functional</div>
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<h2 class="section-title">维度报告<span class="en">各维度证据</span></h2>
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<div class="dim-grid">
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<article class="dim">
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<div class="dim-head">
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<div class="dim-name">哲学一致性<span class="en">Phil. cons.</span></div>
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<div class="dim-score">8<span class="denom">/10</span></div>
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</div>
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<p class="dim-evidence">
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9 张幻灯片的节奏如同一条完整主线（Monocle Editorial）贯穿始终。
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<code>chrome</code> 的用语保持统一格调：<em>"A Talk · 2026.04.22"</em>、<em>"Act II · 04 / 09"</em>、
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<em>"Page 06 · 金句"</em>。美中不足是第 5 张幻灯片上的 <code>kicker</code>——
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<em>"Act II"</em> 没问题，但幻灯片标题 <em>"折叠"</em> 是一个单字展示词，与 Act 序号争夺视觉注意力。值得收紧。
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</p>
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<div class="dim-tags">
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<div class="tag-row"><span class="tag tag-keep">保留</span><span>全部 9 张幻灯片中 chrome / kicker / foot 的词汇体系——这是该演示的身份标识。</span></div>
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<div class="tag-row"><span class="tag tag-fix">修复</span><span>第 5 张：将 kicker 改为 <em>"Act II · 折叠"</em>，或缩小展示标题以理清层级。</span></div>
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</div>
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</article>
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<article class="dim">
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<div class="dim-head">
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<div class="dim-name">视觉层级<span class="en">Hier.</span></div>
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<div class="dim-score">7<span class="denom">/10</span></div>
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</div>
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<p class="dim-evidence">
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英雄页（第 1、5、7、9 张）堪称教科书级别——展示衬线字体占据主导，
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<code>kicker</code> 和 <code>meta-row</code> 退居次要。正文页基本成立：第 2 张幻灯片的
|
||
stat-card 使用 <code>.stat-label</code>（等宽小号）→ <code>.stat-nb</code>（衬线大号）
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→ <code>.stat-note</code>（无衬线正文），三级结构，互不冲突。问题出在第 3 张幻灯片的
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<code>callout</code>——它的左侧边框与 <code>.h-xl</code> 标题在视觉上冲突，
|
||
因为两者处于相同的 x 坐标且权重相近。视线不知道该先读标题还是先读引用。
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</p>
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<div class="dim-tags">
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||
<div class="tag-row"><span class="tag tag-keep">保留</span><span>第 2 张的 stat-card 三级结构——可在所有地方复制。</span></div>
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<div class="tag-row"><span class="tag tag-fix">修复</span><span>第 3 张：将 <code>callout</code> 缩进 <code>2vw</code>，或将其推到正文下方，使其明显属于较低层级。</span></div>
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||
</div>
|
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</article>
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|
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<article class="dim">
|
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<div class="dim-head">
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<div class="dim-name">细节执行<span class="en">Detail</span></div>
|
||
<div class="dim-score">8<span class="denom">/10</span></div>
|
||
</div>
|
||
<p class="dim-evidence">
|
||
多处达到杂志级别——所有 9 张幻灯片中每个 <code>.foot</code> 的基线对齐一致；
|
||
<code>.meta-row</code> 全篇使用同一套等宽字体规范（<code>.16em</code> 字间距、大写）。
|
||
第 4 张的 Pipeline 即使在列数降至 3 时仍保持完美的网格。两个真正的缺失：
|
||
（1）第 3 张幻灯片的图片槽使用 <code>aspect-ratio:16/10</code>，
|
||
但内部的占位文本采用居中对齐，在视口宽度 ≤ 1100px 时显得空洞；
|
||
（2）底部的圆点导航与第 5 张幻灯片的脚注文字重叠，
|
||
因为英雄页的居中网格占用了垂直空间。
|
||
</p>
|
||
<div class="dim-tags">
|
||
<div class="tag-row"><span class="tag tag-keep">保留</span><span>等宽字体的 <code>.foot</code> 规范——这是该演示的点睛之笔，不要改变字间距。</span></div>
|
||
<div class="tag-row"><span class="tag tag-fix">修复</span><span>第 5 张英雄页网格：将内部内容上限设为 <code>min-height:78vh</code>，使脚注不与圆点导航重叠。</span></div>
|
||
</div>
|
||
</article>
|
||
|
||
<article class="dim">
|
||
<div class="dim-head">
|
||
<div class="dim-name">功能性<span class="en">Func.</span></div>
|
||
<div class="dim-score">6<span class="denom">/10</span></div>
|
||
</div>
|
||
<p class="dim-evidence">
|
||
键盘 / 滚轮 / 触摸导航在宿主 iframe 内正常工作（已验证：←/→/PageUp/PageDown 均可翻页）。
|
||
ESC 打开索引概览，圆点点击有效。重大缺失在于示例<em>未附带真实图片</em>——
|
||
第 3 张幻灯片显示一个虚线的 <code>.img-slot</code> 占位符，本应放置产品截图，
|
||
这对示例文件而言是正确的选择，但意味着用户无法判断布局在高保真下的表现。
|
||
第二个缺失：示例卡中的 <code>iframe</code> sandbox 仅设置为
|
||
<code>allow-scripts</code>，因此 WebGL 背景可以加载，但 iframe 内部的圆点导航
|
||
需要先点击一次，键盘导航才能捕获焦点。
|
||
</p>
|
||
<div class="dim-tags">
|
||
<div class="tag-row"><span class="tag tag-keep">保留</span><span>5 个 BUG 修复导航脚本（真实滚动检测、捕获阶段监听器）——经过验证且稳定。</span></div>
|
||
<div class="tag-row"><span class="tag tag-fix">修复</span><span>在示例中添加一个 <code>data:</code> URI 占位图（1×1 彩色渐变），使第 3 张幻灯片的布局在任何宽度下都能正常呈现。</span></div>
|
||
</div>
|
||
</article>
|
||
|
||
<article class="dim">
|
||
<div class="dim-head">
|
||
<div class="dim-name">创新性<span class="en">Innov.</span></div>
|
||
<div class="dim-score">5<span class="denom">/10</span></div>
|
||
</div>
|
||
<p class="dim-evidence">
|
||
创新方面有意保守——这是对歸藏（guizang-ppt-skill）的移植，
|
||
其价值主张在于<em>可预测性</em>而非新颖性。双 WebGL 背景（深色为全息弥散、浅色为螺旋涡流）
|
||
是唯一值得称道的亮点；幻灯片主题切换时的交叉淡入效果细腻且时机恰当。
|
||
但其他所有内容（布局词汇、chrome/foot 模式、主题预设）都是对上游的忠实复制。
|
||
没有一个让人"眼前一亮"的惊喜，能让观众忍不住截屏。就其声明的目的（Monocle Editorial 方向）
|
||
而言，这样做是恰当的。但作为 AI 演示日的作品，这是一个错失的机会。
|
||
</p>
|
||
<div class="dim-tags">
|
||
<div class="tag-row"><span class="tag tag-keep">保留</span><span>双着色器交叉淡入——这是该演示唯一的"魔法"效果，值得保留。</span></div>
|
||
<div class="tag-row"><span class="tag tag-qw">快速取胜</span><span>每个演示添加一处<em>排版</em>亮点——例如在闭幕页添加一个超大的斜体 <code>em</code> kicker 来打破网格。</span></div>
|
||
</div>
|
||
</article>
|
||
</div>
|
||
|
||
<!-- ============ Action lists ============ -->
|
||
<h2 class="section-title">行动清单<span class="en">保留 · 修复 · 快速取胜</span></h2>
|
||
|
||
<div class="lists-grid">
|
||
<section class="list-card">
|
||
<div class="list-head keep"><span>保留</span><span class="ct">不要破坏它</span></div>
|
||
<ul>
|
||
<li>9 页节奏：<code>深色英雄页 → 浅色 → 深色 → 浅色 → 浅色英雄页 → 深色 → 深色英雄页 → 浅色 → 浅色英雄页</code>。这是黄金标准。</li>
|
||
<li>双 WebGL 背景 + 深色与浅色幻灯片之间的 <code>1.2s</code> 交叉淡入。</li>
|
||
<li><code>chrome</code> / <code>kicker</code> / <code>foot</code> 词汇体系——它们承载了 Monocle 方向。</li>
|
||
<li>第 2 张的 3 级 <code>stat-card</code>（<code>label</code> → <code>nb</code> → <code>note</code>）。</li>
|
||
</ul>
|
||
</section>
|
||
|
||
<section class="list-card">
|
||
<div class="list-head fix"><span>修复</span><span class="ct">P0——视觉代价高</span></div>
|
||
<ul>
|
||
<li>第 3 张 callout 缩进——目前与 <code>.h-xl</code> 冲突；向右推 2vw 或放到正文下方。</li>
|
||
<li>第 5 张英雄页居中网格——将内容高度上限设为 <code>78vh</code>，使脚注不与圆点导航重叠。</li>
|
||
<li>第 3 张添加一个 <code>data:</code> 渐变占位图，使布局在窄宽度下即使没有真实素材也能正常呈现。</li>
|
||
<li>第 5 张 kicker / 展示标题：选择其一作为主视觉——目前两者互相争夺注意力。</li>
|
||
</ul>
|
||
</section>
|
||
|
||
<section class="list-card">
|
||
<div class="list-head qw"><span>快速取胜</span><span class="ct">5–15 分钟，高回报</span></div>
|
||
<ul>
|
||
<li>为每张幻灯片注入 <code>data-screen-label</code>，提升可访问性并便于 grep 自检。</li>
|
||
<li>在闭幕页添加一处超大斜体 <em>en</em> 文字，营造排版惊喜。</li>
|
||
<li>将英雄页上的 <code>#hint</code> 叠加层从 <code>opacity:.4</code> 改为 <code>.55</code>——当前几乎不可见。</li>
|
||
<li>添加一个打印样式表（每页一张幻灯片），使 PDF 导出保留节奏感。</li>
|
||
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